I have a lot to learn...
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Voted For: Poet
shotta... wasnt really feelin ya verse .. flow was sorty wierd.. structure messed.. aight punches i guess.. but ya personals didnt really hit hard.. n whas with the speech marks where theres no wordplay????????? i seen way better from you.. -_-
poet: WAY shitter than ya topicals.. lol.. But still good.. nuthin wrong with flow, or punches.. but there was no lines that made me laugh or go "Ooo" .. why arent you dope! its not that hard.. its just like a topical where the topic is shottaboy
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