yo, i liked this, sure the production coulda been better but you rhyme well, and you have a mic presence, and you can flow, thats always a plus, i liked the "why" break down part, that shoulda been the chorus, triples verse was good too, but loud, and the days of the week chorus wasnt great, but not bad overall.....pc

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