lyrically you have gotten better, i can definitaly tell the difference in these two tracks, "blowin up boxes" showed your best lyrical ability yet,i liked the bar"you play your track for your gurl,and she waits for your song to end,then she smiles and asks,when we hearin phenom again""that was hot,and every line till the end got better, so, i dont think your that bad, just my opinion. pc

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