Voted For: Street poet

Street Poet: u wrote a novel, it was uncalled ofr to be that long, i think from where it says limit and down that would have got him, u had a arsenal of multi's which were good, some nice meta's, good structure, ok flow, some good punches and personals, u kinda played the whole canada thing out after awhile, just work on different personals sometimes, and don't write so much "new shit I shall brig it right now, I’ll cut the beef like trade laws concerning mad cow" that was ya best line, watch some of ya words to cause they don't rhyme near the end. 7.5/10


Limited Edition: u could've did better, u had the better opener but u lacked some things like words that rhyme (alone, poem)
u had some personals in there, nice structure, good flow, not alot of multi's, didn't have alot of meta's, good punches, overal just work on ya rhyming scheme. 5.5/10

vote: Street Poet

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