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Old 09-23-04, 03:22 AM   #23
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Voted For: Poet

This was a one sided battle..
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Opener-Poet
Closer-Poet
Flow-Poet
Structure-Poet
Punches-Tied
Metas-Poet (Shotta had little to none)
Personals-Poet
Overall Best Verse-Poet

Advise to shotta-try to get your structure better your lines go from short to long and back to short quick......and try to get more personals and work on your punches and if you do this you will see more votes goin your way!......Vote/Poet
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