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Old 09-23-04, 07:59 AM   #33
Kayem
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

Mad Dog: I Think your lyrics were hella deep. Mad Dog i was really feelin this ... i can relate to this (dunno if this was real though) and flow and structure was ace. You Definatly got your own style. Vocab was good. Overall It was dope ...

One-Man ... I Found Yours was really entertaining (not that she died, obviously) Although it was long it was packed with action. Every bar was meaningful to the story. All the way through the suspence was just building up. Kept me reading it. If it wasn't like that i would of stopped reading it after : The Big Deal. Multies were dope (as always). Vocab was Great Too. My fave parts were the trip to the hospital and The cold act that exposed a cold truth. Overall An Excellent read. your topicals remind me of Poets, (The way its structured).

Overall: I give this to One-Man-Band because i just found his really enjoyable to read. Both were Great. Respect to both of ya.