BREAKDOWN::


ASASIN::


Time To See Who Get's Banned For Certain...
Ya Plan Ain't Workin..Ya Wanna Go on "TOUR" But Da Only Shit You Do On "STAGE IS PULL DA CURTAIN"..//
alright not bad of a begenning..i keep telling you fools you must come strong with a good setup..and end with a good punch..this was cool, but i thought the setup was really well done..but your punch could of came harder..


I'm Hurtin Ya Linez...Give Up Wit Da LIez.....
I'm destroyin ya esteem...cuz da only feedback you get is ya own REPLIES..//
lol..nice punch..feeling it..nice personal ish



Now Why...Must I Eat Your Barz..??
Ya Put Da "SECURITY ON YA DICK" Jus So You Could "KEEP UP YOUR GUARD"..//
umm not bad at all little played concept



Ya Claim to be Lyrically Hard....But Ya Barz..You Stole It...
you throw "SALT WATER" on "HALLMARK CARDS" trying to "SEAS DA MOMENT"..//
hell of a setup punch combo..not all will get this..good shit



Ur My Weakest Opponent..You Got Da Defeaten Component..
I Read Ya Last Bar..And Figured Out Dat I Own It..//
filler shit here..


Ya Slow Kid...Time To Discover...
Ur Worst Then "2 GAY COPS"...Workin "UNDERCOVERS"..//
ok,...not hard though...


From One To ANother...SKILLZ YA WACk...sIn attack..fast..
throwin dis wack cat...back into relapse...//
ok



I ATTACK WIT MY WEAKNESS....fast...
look at my verse..^^ da whole thing I KNEE'D YOU WIT CAPS..// to you this was a good ending right?? to me i diddnt thinkso..thought it was corny shit..but good verse flowed well..some lines that stood out..




SKILLZ::


you aint no a~sas~in, your betta at keepin your ASS~IN..1
and your the type to keep ask~in, for lubrication and napkins//2
NOT A GOOD WAY to begin your verse man..filler all the way..setup wasnt feeling..then your punch didnt hit hard enough


SIn just achieved his passion, fucking around with masked~men..3
i'll leave your skull into fractions, after delieverin more pain than pregnant women under going contractions//4
umm not really feeling this shit here..no good punch here..setup was week..umm and second couplet was way too stretched..



im hotta than oprah's kitchen, after cookin some chicken..5
your betta than me,"your trippin!" and just like losers your bitchin//6
weak..


i hit you without missin, shots will decrease your vision..7
have you go on a mission, like "velma" after breakin and losin her prescriptions//alright shit here..pretty much basic shit.and too simple..



what is this all about, only wackness come out your mouf..9
only time you could be considered "hot" is if you spit under a burning house//this was ok..you said {OUCH NIGGA} TRUST ME MAN WASNT THAT HARD HITTING..



SINce you think your the best, explain how you get banned from the site..11
matter of fact no body wanted you here anywayz like the laker's didn't won't Rice//12
ok..but wasnt feeling it..


thats its!! im fed up!!,.. with all the bullshit you talk..13
and after you leave the site, dont try to get in with another name cuz just like "juwanna man" you'll get caught//14
BLAH..umm way to stretched line man..not hard hitting either..


Death have come to you twice with the intentions of battlin me..15
and you after~death sentence is witnessin you losin this battle against skillz repeatively//
probably your best line here..not really strong but decent

i'll have you talkin like mike tyson, stutterin becuz you loss..17
"ah ah ah" shut the fuck up, cuz the only way you'll ever "shine" is if you spittin with "lip gloss"//18
WEAK..ENDING

BUT your verse was ok..nothing good in it..no hard punches..very little vocab..no decent wordplay..and flow was too choppy..


asasin wins this cause he came with better punches..and his verse flowed well..your flaw was no really good wordplay..have to remember you need some visiual shit in there also..but good verse...need to work on some of your setups and punch combos also..


vote asasin