ASASIN::


Yo Fatal Why You Cock~Spit..??..Ya punches Not~hit...
Ya wanted To get in Phynam's Crew..So I let dis "Vet Work" and give my Jock~Licks..//
ok beginning..wasnt really feeling it...personal wasnt hit hard enough




Check Ya Avey...There's Ya Forehead..So I Red~Dot..Spot~It..//
Too Bad Ya Spit notez..
My punches attacked...member 154 so bad..His Sig'z Broke..//
again kinda a week segment..punch not hitting hard..you tried witha personal here..but if you reworded it probably would of been more effective



Battlin sIn..Think Ya Got A Problem..??
Like Anal Sex With Statues, Fatal regularly Hits Rock Bottom..//
pretty much filler here..nothing appealing and not hard hitting


I got em..So I Fade Ya Pace...
Ya Career is like the Universe in the Garbage, a Waste of Space.. //
this was decent but played concept



Ya raps..Like Pre-teens..Only goin thru a phase..
Ur teeth are outta place..Lemme check ya dentals..//
Drop my verse and leave this fool "speechless" like instrumentals... //
ok ending..not particularly hard..but ok



FATAL ACTIONS::


You battlin FATAL, doesn't that make you think you should a come iller/
Competition, emcee Percy Miller, I"m eatin his verse but he only brings fillers/
ok beginning, not really hard hitting..but not too bad..setup could of been better..and punch couplet thought could of came a little better..

Now I"m blazin em, Middleweight Champion? Glad that this day has come/
Now I'll take the title, Sin couldn't have a strong joint wit a blunt in gymnasiums/
not bad...


I spit wit flamin gums and napalm mucus balls, leave his brains all over walls/
If your Father was an away from ring referee you still couldn't have a win to call/
ok..punch was weak.



I know you heard of me, beat you till you burgony if you try to finish me/
Fatal Actions the main reason this faggot tried to change his identity/
good..but not effective



YOu're too meek bitch, drop a single punch? please don't believe it/
Fatal dropped a verse wit meaning, now your really gonna be the king of deep shit/
just like sins ending ,not too bad but not really hard..thought at this point you should of came hard..


both verses were ok, it seemed neither tried on this battle..but i thought assasin took this..with more punches..not saying they all hit harder but i found more punches in asasins verses than fatals..

fatal not too sure if you have time and shit..why dont you just write a verse..fuck keying it..more comes out of a verse if you put thought into it..but anyhow nice verse..


vote asasin.