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Old 07-13-02, 05:29 PM   #8
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breakdown..

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LIQUID FLAME::


This kid lives in fantasy, to hiM TV is the REAL WORLD
Claims to key but known to C TRL like 12 year old girls
THIS WAS OK , SETUP THOUGHT WAS OK..PUNCH I FELT COULD OF CAME A LITTLE BETTER..NOT TOO EFFECTIVE HERE



Make him fold and curl, he buckles when the heat is on
His only hot SHIT is the heated STOOL he puts his feet upon
NOT BAD HERE..OK WORDPLAY..PUNCH NOT HITTING..



I’m strong, enjoying your weakened stance even more
C’mon whore, we all know what B.F. really stands for
USELESS WORDING HERE..TOO ME ALL FILLER..MAYBE IF REWORDED..COULD OF CAME HARDER..



Flame the Chancellor, I kinda like that, bitch, call me sire
Liquid always extinguishes Black when you fight fire with fire
OK...


I’m a dryer for hire, spinning the hottest threads for a quarter
got you still finding traces of my kids dead in your daughter
LOL..MADE ME LAUGH..NOT BAD


be-headed and slaughtered, took a little off the top like barbers
claim toast? Then I’ll P & NUT in your BUTTER like George Washington Carver
THIS WAS COOL..SETUP THOUGHT COULD OF CAME BETTER THOUGH..


Harvard? Nah, we all know you went to the school of hard cocks
Audios? You’ll never go PLATINUM when I install credit card blocks
OK..PLAYED CONCEPT THOUGH


Make him start and stop, die then breathe when I rewind the clip
I’m directing this documentary entitled; Black Flame: Inside The Bitch
OK..BUT BLAH..



I’ll make you LIe LOw in STITCHes, when I DIS kNEY’s & break joints
only because I shake hands at introductions but B.F. shakes groins
THIS WAS COOL..NICE PUNCH.




He’s got caked loins, three layers of shit, damn he’s full of it
Black Flame, hollow be thy name like the end of my bullet tip
GOOD..FEELING IT



He ain’t pulling CRIP, it’s a fact that he wants to say he BLUE fools
Meanwhile I’m making him SHED BLOOD like gang garden tools
LOL..WAS NICE..BUT NOT EFFECTIVE



Fangs aren’t in rules, so take them out you fucking biter, your snake rattles
I bet you anything that you use at least 2 lines from your last phynam battle
OK PERSONAL..AGAIN NOT TOO EFFECTIVE..


This bitch is cattle, getting branded and he’s running like mayors
And it’s a fact that Black recycles more than ecology majors
NICE PUNCHLINE HERE..ECOLOGY MAJORS SHIT MADE ME LAUGH..WILL BE IN TOP PUNCHES..


I’m just a player, making him mad when I steal this B’s honeys
He got more than sonned, I dwarfed him 6 times and just left him Grumpy
NOT REALLY FEELING THIS..GRUMPY LINE WAS ALRIGHT NOT TO HARD THOUGH



Feeling lumpy? Just put it in your cup cause I know your style to a TEA
No pills for me, because I’m so ill that I make you reach ecstasy when I COUGH E
NOT A GOOD ENDING ,SHOULD OF CAME HARDER HERE..PLAYED CONCEPT THE TEA LINE..BUT NICE VERSE..



BLACK FLAME::


Liquid's carrer is going no
where, like broken throttles,
but i'll have him running for
cover like swimsuit models/
NOT BAD OF A BEGINNING..PRETTY NICE PUNCH..BUT SORTA PLAYED..



call me the devil because i
got Wicked Game, i put water
on lava thus rocking Liquid
Flame/
OK,..SOME WONT GET THIS..BUT I FELT WAS DECENT SHIT..NOT TOO HARD BUT COO

your no one but still
not unheard of, yell 187 cause
this is murder/BLAH


i like your jokes
kid you think you a comic?
i'll make you show your guts
by ripping open you stomach/
NICE..I LIKE THE VISIUAL SHIT..




dick riding is the only time he
stays on top of his biz because
liquid flame has a worst rap then
unpopular kidz/
UMM NOT FEELING IT..



with ease I'll
top ya crew, couldn't eat chicken
but he know to eat a cockatoo/
NICE PERSONAL..


i ripped you i know it makes you
mad u hater, but i just because
liquid likes given oral sex doesn't
mean that he's a glad he ate her/
NOT FEELING IT..I KEEP READING IT AND CANT FEEL THIS..




homo i will never miss a gay,
you could battle the sun and still
couldn't diss a ray/
NOOOO



he could sell
drugs and couldn't push his joint,
but i stab him just to push my
point/
SETUP WAS COOL..BUT THE SECOND LINE FOR PUNCH NOT EFFECTIVE AT ALL..FILLER NO NO



so tell how does it feel to
take a thrashing barred? you
like dmx in movies you only
acting hard/
NOT LIKEING IT..



bitch i'll trick you
because your ass is mine, I'll
smash his mind, so he can't
think of winning, i'll make your
career like your sex life, quickly
ending/
OK ENDING..NOT REALLY HARD THOUGH..


UMM BOTH OF YOU FOOLS.CAME NICE..LIQUID CAME NICE FOR A KEY..I FEEL YOU SHOULD WRITE YOUR VERSES AND THINK ABOUT YOUR SHIT..BUT THIS WAS A NICE VERSE..HE HAD SOME OK WORDPLAY..AND FEW NICE PUNCHES..BLACK FLAME NOT LIKE YOUR USUAL VERSES..I FELT DIDNT COME AS HARD AS USUAL..BUT HE CAME WITH SOME NICE PERSONALS IN HIS VERSE..THAT WON IT..

VOTE BLACK FLAME..