blaaaazin!

that was aight shorty...

some decent rhymes, very creative an it was ALL REAL
i liked it, 7/10...

only thing is u can tell ya new here, but thats okay, you'll get better as u get more practice, on the whole tho, it was very decent an it had meaning, u stuck with the topic an it was a solid peice

propps babygirl

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