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Old 09-24-04, 02:24 PM   #14
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This was feedback posted for Yvonne

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yvonne gets this fo sho...
cos she came up harder...her structure was better and her verse was flowing better than hypnotist...her wordplay and personals were decent too...gd job...

hypnostist...
in ur whole verse u had only one punch thats the arab line and that shit was fucked up ...ur structure was fucked up 2 it aint bout structure here >>> all bout the punches....i mean ur verse was slacking...lack of wordplay and personals......1.....just work on ur skills..
peace..
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