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Old 09-24-04, 03:29 PM   #6
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Voted For: youngd

bad boy, you were very basic in this one, you had no real hard hitting punches, they were all weak, and mainly not directed at youngd, you also had very basic vocabulary, just sayin wack all the time and rhymin "shame, lame, name" and "page, rage" up your vocab and try and direct your punches at the other person, also add some personals into ya verse if ya can.

youngd, you had a better verse, you were using better vocab, but i still felt you could have aimed your punches more towards bad boy as well. you had a nice rhyming scheme though.

both of you try not to use self glory, coz that's not going to get you anywhere in battles, the idea is to diss the other person.

v/ youngd, for coming with a more complex verse.