ok~ima vote in this cus i like to read topicals and i love lord of the rings..lol
L.E.~your verse was good, nice flow and vocab, i loved your opening lines and your closer, you set this up nice....tight verse
poetic~you had very good imagery in your vocab, you said a lot in every line, and your flow was great, you really new your character, which make sit that much better,and the words made it that much more powerful as well, i could picture this verse as i was reading it.........nice job fellas....
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oetic