Voted For: Phantom

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d.j em~ya verse was good,good flow up until you came towards the ending, it kinda fell off(the mr. big c line on didnt flow too well) cus you added too many syllables, but you had good personals and nice structure.........
phantom~your verse was great, you had very creative vocab and punches, they hit hard here,and well written too, your opener was ill,nice personal on the name, ya opening lines set the flow nicely, and ya verse grew stronger towards the end to close this with a dope line(delicates), that was nice wordplay,,
phantom took this with his vocab and creativity,as well as punches........nice job both

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