hmmmm, i would say this was more of a convo, your having with yourself, try to make your future poems,if any, have more...words, but yes, i can tell you have confidence, but this was not really poem material, in my eyes, not extremely bad, because i have seen worse in this thread, believe it or not, but ok, quick little piece

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