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Voted For: $~DeE_bOy~$
only 10 lines and this kid still won. even though i aint see any real hard punches i felt dee boys more. elusiv g ur strucure wasnt there. there was no strucure at all. i couldnt find my place at times reading ur verse. ur joke about his mom breakin the chair was jus lame. the only part i liked was when u said his rep is built on claiming gangsta. next time come with harder punches. at least i could tell were dee boys lines started and ended. and his punches hit harder
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