The Femcee...for these reasons
Breakdown of Verses
C.F.C.
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aight miss I really don't wanna verbally bust on you'
i jus wanna get u in the bed wit no clothes on and than bust on u'
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^^^^^Started weak in my view and rhymed with the same shit.
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chick u ain't nasty enough to get close to defeatin me'
should'nt u be playin wit dolls listenin to peaches and cream'
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^^^^^^^^That was weak as hell, maaaan.
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nah let me stop ur clicks a bunch a b-boys this is a MC sight'
ur fuckin wit an A plus nigga your only B boy tight'
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^^^^^^^It was aight....Your text raps bore me like Cam'Ron.
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yo the only way your beatin me is wit ur hands on my dick'
I bet u fucked easy-e before he died jus to say that ur sick'
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^^^^^^The first line bout the hand on ya dick is played and the easy e line was aight.
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u did'nt really wanna get into a verbal rumble'
your like mugsy bougues in this rap game shootin against Mutumbo'
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^^^^^It was pretty weak. Seemed lik the first line Fabolous ever spit or some shit.
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so get ur mind right like jay and bleek'
your rhymes are shit do ur teeth decay when u speak'
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^^^^^OK line but still lookin' for the goodness.
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please do me a favor and don't neva battle again'
your raps are illegal so basically ur battlin a sin'
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^^^^^^Weak as hell
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your skillz is like a decapatated corpse tryin to be the head chairman'
by the time this rhyme is over ur gonna be my new #1 fan'
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^^^^^^The first line was good but the 2nd line fu'cked up the rhyme scheme and was weak.
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i'm bout to leave u wit my final thought like this was jerry springer'
ur rap skillz are fallin like alicia keys maybe u should of been a singer'
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^^^^^^Jerry Springer line was OK I guess but the Alicia Keys line is extremely played.
I'll give that verse about a 1.5/10.
Ms. Danna Dane
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fuckin with dane? u catchin a quick "L'..my verse lets off steam like da humudity down in hell..i catch you on da block and i'mma flood ur fenders with gun-shells..leaving ur body red-HOT! like a cooked lobster tail/
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^^^^^^Pretty good even though I'm not too much into the gangsta rap shit.
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i wuz gonna spit 1st so i can smoke a L and wait on ur chump-shyt..its ashame u gettin ur azz beat quicker den a horny munk dick..so just face da facts and get-over it/
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^^^^^^^^This bar got kinda sloppy and you already used an "L" line in the bar b4 it.
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you mad cuz u cant get down with a crew or u keep gettin trade..you beatin me? ur head must be pulled tight, nicca take out dem braids/
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^^^^^OK bar
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steppin to me, u betta have sum ill-ness installed.. u standin next to me while ur celly ringin is da only way dis will be a close call/
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^^^^^^Nice shit.
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the feelin of beatin me,so far only sK!llz will know.. u couldnt gas me even if ur verse wuz presented by amaco/
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^^^^^^pretty decent bar.
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i'll come round ur set and will destroy ur enviroment.. go ahead and grab ur nine,i do mike-style and brang da 45 back outta retirement/
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^^^^^^Really not into the gangsta rap but still better than all of his bars.
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i;m throwin punches, why u scratchin trynna get dane frame scar'd..my punches will leave'ya lik typing in a pass-word, all u see is stars/
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^^^^^^The first line was borin' but the password line was nice.
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and i'm droppin nothin but dat hot shyt,dunn.. leavin mo shock-wave impacts den a nuclear bomb colliding with da air-force-one/
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^^^^^^^^OK bar.
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and if dis wack nicca win, i wanna re-match it..like OJ gettin married again, i want another stab at-it/LOL
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^^^^^Ha! Nice finishin' line.
Give this verse a 5.5/10
Flow: Dane
Creativity: Dane
Punches: Dane
Wordplay: None (that I saw)
Overall
ane
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Ms. Danna Dane