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Old 09-25-04, 10:15 AM   #2
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

flow-manipulation got this down here, nfamous lines were streched and some were too short, manipulation for the most part everything was put together

punches/personals-manipulation, lot better punches that were more creative and hit harder, all of nfamouses verse was basically dissin the fact shes a girl, gotta switch that shit up then the whole verse is plain and played wit no creativity

vocab-manipulation, not much to say here she had better vocab here

overall picked manipulation harder hitting punches and better flow, no hate on nfamous...did good too good luck

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