alright fuck dis lil arguement.......

Yo kid u need 2 start from the foundation..... @ least attempt 2 make ALL yo linez rhyme, thatz where u fucked up, couple played out linez, lotta room 4 improvement, don't trip though i aint gonna diss yo good linez, kauze simply i aint found any, Elevate.....

alright woman, yo flow was decent, nothin high standard or glamourous, but it was by far the better flow, u started with that "Cooked lobster tail" line that was pretty basic but that alone was a good start against yo opponent, try not using obvious thingz in yo linez, it remindz me of "tryin 2 step 2 me wit yo linez but yo shoe lacez un-tied" so i usually str8 talk shit but since yo opponent'z verse made me feel sick i read yo entire flow, after a better start.... u waz goin a lil off subject but workin on yo opponent so that aint a minus, and i actually lined the ending "and if dis wack nicca win, i wanna re-match it..like OJ gettin married again, i want another stab at-it" good job woman, thatz how u got my vote.

Something 2 think bout..... next time u trippin on h8 votez which u seem like the only 1 who think it's a h8 vote, make sure u don't suck, by the way.... Elevate.

Vote = Ms Danna Dane Aka Da broad who Whooped yo azz