Skadoosh!
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Voted For: Paramik
Tight battle, close one to call.................
Black Plague u dropped a nice verse, it was consistent mostly but the flow fell off a little coming to the end, u need to try nad shorten ure lines and keep them the same length. u had some nice punches rollin some hard, some not so hard, but uer first line, u cant really be dissin his structure when ures is all wack, personals were not that good, i could only see a couple, nuthin that really struck him, u shud try playing off his name and shit more. wordplay was gud, nuthin too basic, some gud complex shit in there, some played stuff, but overall a nice drop.
Paramik a hott drop to, u really brought the big guns, ure flow was consistently gud all the way through, u kept ure structure together which kind of fucked up BP's first line. u had the punches in there hitting hard, some gud personals, especially the nice play off of his name using the BP gas station shit. the KKK shit has been done too many times before, the rayman shit was funny though, some original lines in there that i dont think i've heard before. rhymin was basic some places, but a got a little more complex at times, more complexity though, need to elevate that shit. overall a tight drop and i think you bested Black Plague in this battle.
***One quick pointer that i keep on saying, don't bother to explain ure punches, real MC's should be able to get them in the first place, and if they can't then they shouldn't even be voting***
VOTE: Paramik
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