Ok I'm a be real cuz I hate bullshit feed an if u gone do a album u need real feed.....first ya vocals are way too low....or beat is too loud its one of the two but ya levels is off...second your pronounciation is bad....I could only make it make out 2 to 3 words in each line u spit.....chorus wasn't understandable.....u gotta slow down, I know u wanna rap fast but jus cuz u like the slyle doesn't mean it fits you...your mumbling words trying to keep flow an becuz of this it affects ya delivery, my suggestion is you give yourself time to develop before u put out a album cuz first impressions is lasting, an if ya first album people hate they'll always view u as wack.

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