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Old 09-25-04, 01:55 PM   #14
MaNiPuLaTiOn
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firstly
CFASTUNNAL
WACK-seriously pathetic.sorry lol
no structure,no flow,no multies.......
u didnt have a single punch or personal u jus through a bunch of words together,half ur shit didnt even make sense,u had no vocab,no wit,no metas.nothin at all........horrible verse....
take a look at ur opponents n set ur shit like that ..elevate.

FINAL
structure was good....
flow was ok....
basically u had a better verse,beta punchesw,stuc,flow,etc....
still say u need to elevate a lot though...
ur best line was the stun a crowd shit,coz u attempted a meta and sum wordplay,all the rest were really jus filler....
u gotsta cum wit metas n wit to make ya punches dope.
u won.but elevate....

hit me up if u want any help wit anythin..
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