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Old 09-25-04, 03:29 PM   #11
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ice pick~yea your verse was aight now when doin text i highly rank on punches an vocab now you had some punches but they were kinda blan no wordplay wasnt feelin alot of tha punches you were throwin at dv you had a lil vocab twords the end of the verse your structure was kinda choppy but not that bad....

DeadlyVision~your verse was betta then ice picks cause of your punches an the way you set them up thats very important vocab was aight structure was good had some personals in their overall i liked your verse an thought you had more punches an personals thats why i'm giving this battle to you....vote deadlyvision
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