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Old 09-25-04, 03:44 PM   #12
SUCC MACOKK
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hands down Street Poet merked this kid with extended vocab,humorous wordplay, and hard hitting punches.Infamuz,your verse was pretty wack to say the least.You rhymed the same word twice in the OPENING line, and you had a bad rhyme scheme and your structure was pretty herbish with the /'s.In that whole verse,I didn't see one line that had a decent punch or any attemps at witty wordplay.Street's barz were stretched as hell but he had some ok multies but they didn't flow too too great.He had some played out stuff like michael jackson but I liked how he worded it which made it not so bad. He didb't have many personals but his verse as a whole was a lot more consistent than Infamuz.

V. Street Poet.
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