Voted For: 20 GraND

20 grand: this wasn't the best battle i've read... cuz this battle was pretty weak... you were only a lil bit creative..dat iw wut u really need to work on!! alot!! u should also try to think of good metaphors and even try to do personals!!!just uppin on vocab espceially k!!

scenario..your verse was very weak..it was mostly elementry.. but its pretty good for a person like u i guess.. you really need to uppin on vocab..cuz ur rhymes are elementry..and work on ur punchlines so it will hit harder...

vote: 20

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