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Old 09-25-04, 05:04 PM   #3
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Voted For: Plutonium

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plutonium~nice flow in this verse, you had good multies and wordplay, liked the paroll-ing line, it was dope,and your verse had hard hitting punches and pesonals as well,liked the opener, it was funny,and the last bar was creative and well worded, nice job
Daclassic~your verse was good too, nice flow as well,but you didnt really have very strong punches, although i did like your closing bar, was preety good,some alright personals too, but just didnt seem to hit as hard as plutoniums,but good job as well.......
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