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Old 09-25-04, 07:52 PM   #1
CommonGrounds
New to RB
 
Posts: 3
From: Seattle
tryin to get into this rap thing

IP:

listen unlike most of ya tricks i spit mah rhymez quick to the tip
i get on the mic and let spits rip you from head to toe like jay-z
i be gettin mo, mo money mo cash mo hoes the only thing
you be gettin is bullet holes commin from mah semi-automatic
spray and close range wit mah 12 gage---trying to touch mah flow
is impossible im a lyrical sage filled wit rage ready to cut loose
im goin threw my lyrical stage livin in my lyrical sanctum
readin the book in mah head page by page i dont smoke
but still by skill i always blaze-----

1st flow ever so let me know wat u think and how i could improve
also sorry if i broke any rulz or anything

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