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Old 09-25-04, 11:06 PM   #11
Kawn Flixx
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not av ery good battle....

Street:
ok...
The lines Were S---T--R--EC--H--E---D
like whoa!!! but you had some ok lines
in there in terms of wordplay...but flow wasn't that good
at all...structure your wrods better also
it was hard for me to read.....

U.G.: yo man you need to elevate bad
I dunno if some of ur verse got cut off
but the structure and flow wAS BAD
the punches were plaid to DEATH
try to use persoals too
He even had a personal for himself

vote/SS

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