that was kinda funny.....i liked it......but ya gotta know how ta cook for yaself.....ya know?i take it you haven't rapped in a while......cuz you came weaker than usual....lol.....don't worry.....happens to me too....crit my open mic "I Pray"
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=151605
just copy and paste that to your adress bar
nice shit tho.....peace