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Old 09-26-04, 12:56 AM   #13
streetryda
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Voted For: §treet§yndicate

aight yo this was a weak battle i mean i know ya'll are newbies but ive seen a lot better from them this battle wasnt that good but hey your just starting out so ill hand it to ya for trying...
§treet§yndicate- aight man you got this but just barely you had no structue not that well worplay and you had ur stuff talked out it was too long so work on that and some wordplay..also you coulda hit a lil harder with your punches and next time throw in some personals cuz it would help over all 4/10

ill bing aka U.G- aight you had an okay structure had weak punches but better personals and wordplay but work on your structure and i saw some metas nice but it was a close battle

you both need to elevate more

metas-ill 2/10
punches-§treet 6/10
structure-none
personals-ill 3/10
wordplay-ill 5/10
flow-§treet 5/10
opener-§treet 4/10
closer-ill 3/10

you both need to elevate and dont self glorify thats just gona get you less votes

return the favor
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