Voted For: bLiNkZ

blinks: Aight.. ya had madd concepts for ya punches.. but you didnt execute them as well as they coulda been executed.. and there wasnt any personals. Flow was on mostly, but those lines are way stretched, it makes ya structure messy.. try shortening your lines, or usin a diff font..

mistic-rogue: way better structure and flow.. punches were personal.. wasnt feelin ya closer though.. and the other two bars were kinda weak-ish..

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