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Old 09-26-04, 12:12 PM   #8
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Voted For: Fiya Spitter

aight battle man..............

Fiya Spitter nice drop overall, nuthin in there that sucked ass in my opinion, although no need to explain punches at the end. ure flow was on from start t ofinish, a nice structure, but puttin shit in the centre is kinda pointless unless it means sumthin, or so i was told when i did it. nice wordplay in there, no rhymes that got too complex, but i dont know maybe u werent tryin, sumtimes i do that. punches were gud, not all of them hit hard, but majority were gud, personals were gud, nice play off his name and his old sig, funny shit. nuthin over creative, just a basic rippin verse, so all in all gud shit!!!

AutoMATIK nice verse to, but yo man there aint no need to enlarge the text, unless there is MC's on here that are partially blind. ure flow was nice, the opener was pretty choppy and rhymin "want trouble" with "stunt devil" aint really a perfect rhyme, although it did rhyme a little. wordplay was aight, nuthin over complex but it was better than fiya spitters. punches were there, but overall i think fiya brought harder punches. personals were aight, nuthin too creative, u shud try playin off names and sigs and shit, bit of self-glorification at the end, no one really likes that, but i suppose everyone does it. overall a nice verse but i think fiya beat u!!!

VOTE: Fiya Spitter

i peeped ure shit, return the favour and peep my shit thats in my siggy.........
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