Voted For: Quick Witted

Scenario got this...
better structure, witty punches, nice metas n personals, just the better verse on the whole..
no one believes in ya style or talent~cause that would be like christopher reeves trying to ice skate
unlike u others are successful at winning~cause there's a better chance of illegal immigrants trying to migrate
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that was niiiice
decent drop scenario, keep em comin..

c.f.s, ya structure was horrible, i couldnt find ya bars, matter fact, there was none!...it was just all one big mess, improve on that, i aint gonna comment on the rest of ya verse cause i couldnt find the rhyms, structure was disgraceful, improve that kid
no hate, just tellin it how i see it

return fave

p e a c e

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