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Old 09-26-04, 06:56 PM   #9
EmerginMc07
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Voted For: WORDPLAYA

yo dis goes to wordplaya, he had god struc, wordplay, and punches, he could of worked on vocab and mayb a lil more metas, um ur flow was decent and it all clicked wit the mystikal thing but the only thing is i would auggest elavatin on makin it more clear so you dont have to explain it at the end,

abstrak- dawg u had a pretty decent verse i was feelin yo shit but u need to work on struc man dont try to fiit all these things on one line jus keep goin wit it, also ur punches were a lil played but there were a few lines that struck my attention besisdes all that wordplay, vocab and flo was all pretty good but wasnt enough to get the W

v/ Wordplaya

yo yall return da favor man NO HATE sombodys gota loose!

vote wit me n blinkz thx peace GOOD BATTLE YALL!
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