Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: LiL G BrO
ok yooo lil g bro u need to work on yo struc like fuckin crazy shit i hate readin paragrpah struc's man dont rite in paragrpahs to ahrd to read, um your vocab and wordplay were decent and your flo was pretty good, your punches hit pretty koo but always work on those man cus u do need a lil elevation but you got him wi a few lines,
New Kid- u must be new man um u shuda rote more, your struc was pretty str8 better than Lil G bro but u also need to work on yo vocab, your ryms were a lil basic but ur style is unique man i felt it, u need to get pucnhes and some of ur lines dint rym ,
my vote goes to lil g bro for a better all around verse
v/lil g bro
yall retrun da favor man NO HATE go to me vs blinkz please man no hate votes!
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