Voted For: Phantom

9th degree- your verse had a little humor ..I found the first verse funny. There were no hard hitting punches. Structure needs work also. I got kind of lost through the middle of the verse. that balled line is weak. come back stronger next time

Phantom- Yours were a little funny also. some line I didnt like but there were a few I did. when you voted for him to make you look better and that word play line. Structure was way better. And it was nice to add that quote in there. fair verse but could of been much better.

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