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Old 09-26-04, 10:06 PM   #10
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Voted For: InFiniTe-LyriCs

to me this was kinda a blow out
infinite..ur structure is a lil weird but it flowed fairly nice
good opener nice strong personal punch
also a good ending in ur middle good name personal

exclusive
you had a nice verse well actually it was fair..
bad structure..fair punches..fairly weak personals
your ender was wack
middle was nice
beggining was stretched and wack..
my vote i L
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