Voted For: Yvonne

Yvonne- Okay very short battle. no hard hitting punches. can't really comment on structure. You shouldn't have to explain your punches. I understood everything you said.
Nothing really good about this verse. needs a lot of work

Hypnotist- same for you. your lyrical content needs work. expecially on the vocab part. nothing hard hitting in your verse. punches not strong enough dunny. not a good verse

Yvonne got this by a little

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