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Old 09-26-04, 11:14 PM   #12
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If thats what you thought
 
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Voted For: Soulless

Souless- An okay verse. Great with the personals and a few good punches. an alright structure. Nice wordplay especially with that A W thing. And the closer was nice. keep it up

Empire- an alright verse. nothing really personal about this and your punches weren't as hard. I know you can come better then this empire. It seemed like you rushed this.
No need to explain punches we get them. Vocab wasn't as nice either. you should rematch.

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