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Old 09-27-04, 12:29 AM   #8
Terumoto
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shotta: you had some aight punches in there.. but ya structure is WACK.. stretched lines here and there.. every word starts with a capital.. quotation marks left and right... so damn hard to read?! ya flow was ok.

va: neat easily read structure.. opener = dopeness .. almost all a ya punches connected.. cept for a few that didnt really hit hard but had madd flow.. nice metas.. VERY well executed multis. i wasnt kiddin when i said u should be multi queen lol

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