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Old 09-27-04, 01:01 AM   #19
Terumoto
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Voted For: Phantom

phantom: you had some MADD punchlines...

yeah you runnnin shit, and you takin it pretty far...
was gunna drop some personals, but nobody knows who you are...

^that one had me laughin.

nothin wrong with ya structure or flow... good wordplay.. it was a nice verse all round..

Livin legend: WTF structure???!! every 3rd line was stretched... and those explinations were so.. everywhere.. na'mean?? ya verse was ok i guess.. very forced wordplay.. and why u usin hyphens... ya got no multis.. flow was kinda stretched
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