ok... this peice had a strong message to it... and that message is tru and strong and more people need to learn it... the rymin was good too.. but the flow flucutated WAY to much.. one line that didnt ryme some where, a 3 lines in a row that rymed... if u work out those little peices, that can make the world of a peice..... but good message and good meanin and virtures... keep it flowin