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Old 09-27-04, 09:24 AM   #21
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this fag's as wack as wack gets, and that's just my first impression
usin my words as weapons, to burst and wreck him i'll teach this herb a lesson
put you in an even worse depression by sendin cursed verse in this nerds direction,

/\ This opener had mad multies the rhyming flow and structure word perfect wordplay dope way to start

scythin ya head. i bring more punches than that last cypher ya read.
graspin some scissors, “net”bitch, cos its obvious ya whole “lifes on a thread”
/\ nice punch multies in there some real good flow nice struc too

fuckin netcees be wrecked easy cos in multi battles not even the best beat me
white tee? Please kid, you’re a rook.. half the cats on rv aint heard a ya the rest sleeping
/\ lol nice punch decent multi dawg wordplay again real strong

This stooge is ripped clean, fuck scythes, dude my fists reap… bruise him swiftly..
Check ya name.. how ya expect to out-multi me? Kid, ya cant even use the shift key
/\ Whoa punch bang bang wallop again multi there too flow strong structure maintaining too

talking n squawkin shit, fuck that ill leave ya morbid fa startin this..
challengin me to a multi battle? man… youre more stuck up than a narcasist
/\ dope multi here punch aight not as strong as the others but good none the less flow and structure top notch still

Open ya chest n splatter ya ribs, kid im bad as there is, n im at it to win
Blasts to ya chin, till ya battered n skinned from ya brain matter to shins
/\ Hott wordplay usin body parts punch multi all there flow and struc still not slippin

Ya makin me ball with laughter… cos when ya drop ya battles they all disasters
Scold n’ slash ya, punish this kid, n’ roll him after… just fa tryna kickit with the Multi-Master
/\ Nice closer usin ur nick-name as a multi flow still there as was the flow...dope verse

I'd give ya an 8.5/10 the multies as usual mad and the flow and structure made sure it didn't slip...also the punches used were real good...and the wordplay blew me away man fuck it 9/10 final score

I Got Sum 'Clever Vocab' No Doubt My 'text~is~wise' Take 'Action' To 'Close da Spam'As I Click And 'X~ur~Size'*
No 'Peace' I Spray 'insect-icides' So You 'rest~wit~flies' This Dude Tit~fucks Granny's With Them 'Wrinkled breast he rides'
/\ nice multies flow and struc clean an aight punch but not feelin all the ~ ' makes ya verse look messy

Give u lyrics, Let u Borrow My Vocals and u still would Not Live Up To 'Word~My~Spits'
Ur destined~to~trip, cuz my spits cause blockages, leavin u confused with 'No~chips'
/\ hmm not feelin this much no punch really kinda self-g but multi was there but not as strong as last bar

Ill read just~ya~lens, you cant edit~ur~shit, you complain more than yo sis on 'slimfast~diets'
Ight im flippin~ya~chips, while ur~sippin~on~piss, ur~shit couldn’t flow if u had period~leakages from 'ya~clit'
/\ er punch aight multi a bit messy again not beatin OMB

Dogg This Aint A Movie So Why u actin wise? ima 'Compress Ya Ass' 'Square-Up' Worse Than 'Quadrilaterals~factorized'
I'll Leave Ya Brain In Pieces~Covered Where 'da~napkin~lies' Have You 'Battle In Brail' After I 'attack~ur~eyes'
/\ nice bar good punch multi strong more like this please

I disrupt~peeps, leave ya bankrupt~with~ease and discup~knees, cause ya cant 'stand~out'
big up~da~breeze, causin~fatalities, the only time u suck~seed, is when I bust 'in~ya~mouth'**
/\ multi aight punch slightly played but there flow and struc good

Theres shit On ur PC Stool Cuz Its really dark where u sit, Did You 'Bite From ur Dad' Or Is That A 'shark on his tit'
I'll 'Throw~Fire~Spreading' And 'Hit~da~Sparks~Which~I~Lit', you Used Ya Moms Make~up Kit And Left 'lipstick marks on her clit'
/\ Used clit already in a bar to make a rhyme so not feelin as much mum lines played punch therefore lacked flow nearly tipped but jus managed to keep it goin

All in all i'd give a 6.5/10 multies were aight but OMB clearly had more experience in this battle i'm sorry to say...in my opinion he murdered you clearly u had an aight verse but u lost out on punches flow multies and wordplay...RTF on ma open mic
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