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Old 09-27-04, 10:34 AM   #22
Triple_N
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Good Multi battle:

OMB......your flow was nice, an with those longt ass lines u managed to keep a good structure, your verse was riddled with multis that actually made sense an didn't seemed forced at all, you also threw some decent punch in there I especially liked the "life on a thread" line, good wordplay, but this a multi battle so heres my breakdown:

Multies: 8/10
Flow: 9/10
Structure: 6/10
Multi placement: 8/10
Overall: 31/40

White: Your verse had some nice multi syllable rhymes instead of all internals, but you flow was bad, an structure was as well, some multies seemed forced just there to be there, you had good wordplay too if this were a wordplay battle u woulda took it, a few punches nothing strong, but had some nice multies an some forced ones, here's my breakdown:

Multies: 8/10
Flow: 6/10
Structure: 5/10
Multi placement: 7/10
Overall: 26/40

Good Battle, no hate just my honest opinion
Vote: OMB
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