FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP:
I been backstabbed MY crew u jacked but u'll never be Destined,
Coz the crew won't be the same without us the originals who defended,
^^^The rhyming and diction in these two lines are butter...nice
good verse...very descriptive...I would say watch how many syllabled you squeeze in a line...I try to keep mine at 15 or below...vary that
imagery was good ...but could stand for more metas
nice drop though
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