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Voted For: Lost & Found
LF- okay verse nothing special. The first bar was very funny. structure was kind of fucked with all them dots...but you had a nice flow with it. Lyrical content okay. but you got the format down jus a little with coming up with punches...
Ls- vocab wasnt as good as Lf was and your punches werent that good...nothing stuck. structure was off a little...but okay. flow just wasnt as good as lost and founds. and up your vocab a little. I didnt get that john ritter line. I don't get the punch if it was one....
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