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Exclusive-Decent verse. A few punches...but I like the first bar. and the second....jar of relish line was decent...and nice wordplay I had to say. but fix your structure and better your flow....but okay spit...

CccP- some of your lines were to damn long....but in your verse their were no hard hitting punches....nothing stuck...or made me say damn...and up your vocab or lyrical content.
To bring punches come with the setup in the first line then the punch in the second line....I just see alot of filler...especially the last line....

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