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Old 09-27-04, 09:28 PM   #42
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Voted For: Paramik

I seen ya other verses, ya "structure" is off like that of the leanin tower of Piza
You not on my level..I'm "Everywhere You Want To Be" like ya credit card Visa
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD WORDPLAYS AND AN PUNCH NICE

"Like A Pimp" wit Lil' Flip i'll drop a verse, and leave this "Ho on tha floor"*
You dont get respect...You get hit up more than the local dealers door
Para you from Florida? Battle'd me and i knocked you out like Hurrican Charlie
You try to shatter my ego, but Im like B.Willis from unbreakable..U can't scar me**
^^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE PERSONAL AND AN PUNCH GOOD FLOW NICE WORDPLAYS NICE MAYNE


Ya last battles have been 2 liners... cuz you can only come up wit 1 line at a time
You read my verse and it leveled you, like you sniffin pain't...It's fryin ya mind
I can see by your avvy that you hittin keys in a desperate attempt to contest
But you winnin this battle would be unlikely, like homeless men bein put udner house arest
Kid thinks he gansta, but he's only "Strapped" when he puts on his velcro Sped shoes***
I KO'd this fool, leavin his ass passed out, gassed, harassed like holocostal
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE VERSE,,,,,LIKED DA CLOSA AND DA WORDPLAYS U USE AND DA PUNCHES (WERENT HITTIN) BUT IT WAS COOL DOUGH








This wack textcee thinks he can beat me, I'll bring out my rifle.
Cause Black Plague thought he could steal verses by owning a bible.
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER GOOD PUNCH


Bitch claims he is the earthquake, but I already got his ass shook.
He couldn't drop hot rhymes, if he fell in love with a poetry book.
Must be lying, says he 18 but spit wack, I know this kids in youth.
Speaks the truth?, but said more lies than in the Movie “Phone Booth.”
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE MAYNE GOOD PUNCH (HITTIN HARDER)


Fags like a dull pencil, I’ll sharpen him so he can better “get the point.”
My lines could get this guy “moving out”, even if he’s an immovable joint.
Like losing AOL connections, “BPs” punches can’t ever “connect.”
Thought he could make his lines stronger, by putting special effects.
^^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCH NICE MAYNE GOOD PERSONALS



I bet he wouldn’t want to kill me if he joined the Ku Klux Klan. *
And Black Plague can’t even throw a killing punch, if he was Rayman. *
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CLOSA GOOD VERSE

I HAVE TO GIVE DIS TO PARAMIK CAUSE HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES (HARDER) AND GOOD FLOW

BLACK U HAD GOOD FLOW WORDPLAYS BUT PUNCHES WASNT HITTIN IT GOOD VERSE DOUGH KEEP IT UP MAYNE

V-PARAMIK CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW PLUZ PERSONALS

~PEACE~