quick: dopeness... was feelin it... hard to read with that structure mess but i got it.. madd content n good word choice.. hope shit gets better for ya with our rec. deal... you deserve it

ruff: above average... good content. some of the rhymes u used were a little basic but the feeling was there.

pro: yours was a lil hard to understand.. had to read it twice.. but it was good. good flow, good content.. maybe different word choice would make it easier to read.

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