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Old 09-27-04, 10:08 PM   #10
cordless
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From: on paper
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"i ride with style while your cheap ass rydin stock
scratch that, ill hack that, back track you ride cock"

^^excellent wording and flow. i enjoyed that. only thing is that both words should be the same. i personally would have used the word RYDIN both times...just to keep the symmetry and the whole concept uniform. but i liked it kid. keep doin it
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